Friday, May 29, 2009

practice 2

Practice 2
Unemployment is increasingly serious in many countries. Some people think students only need to get primary education while others think secondary education is necessary. To what extent do you agree?


In current world, unemployment seems to become an increasingly tough problem to settle. Hence, some people argue that students just need to get primary education but others believe secondary education is essential. As for me, I reckon that students ought to at least get the secondary education.
Firstly, primary education cannot meet the requirements of contemporary world. With the development of science and technology, well-trained and sophisticated workers are needed. As for some high-tech manufactures and trades, only individuals with high educated background can get access to. However, primary education is just a basic education engaged in teaching children how to write read, and tackle daily math problems. Therefore, if a person go to work just after finishing his primary school, he may not be capable of cater to the needs of modern industry and business. Hence, he may fail to find a job, which would increase the unemployment instead.
Secondly, people may be less competitive when they only get primary educations. Compare with those people who get secondary or even higher education, they lack of academic backgrounds and critical thinking methods. So when assigned to carry on one job, they tend to be more likely to mess it up. Because of limited knowledge backgrounds, they are more likely to misunderstand their work, which may trouble others. In addition, people who only get primary education may not win the job interview due to short of necessary interviewing skills and a satisfying resume.
Lastly, it may exert detrimental influence upon our society, even cause disasters. We live in this world not just for the sake of survive. We need to figure out the beauty of life, to understand the culture diversity, to expand our outlooks. If we just get primary education then go to work, this society would no doubt transfer to be a mega factory of manufacturing workers. We will be automatically become simple-minded and ignorant; we will be easily manipulated by someone who has ulterior motives. This society would be led to autocracy, dictatorship instead of democracy. Personal worship and ideology brainwashing activates (delete) would be inundated with that society. Citizens would lead an inferior and chili life, even need to face internal disorders and ceaselessly wars. Finally it may lead to a tragedy to the whole nation.
In a conclusion, people should take at least secondary school rather than primary ones. Ordering students just take primary education is not only a shortsighted behavior but also a behavior lacking of humanity care. It betrays the spirit of modern society. Therefore, students should rather take secondary educations than just take primary ones.

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